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Welcome to Worldwide Recovery



Welcome,

to World Wide recovery.

I can see from the grimace on your face,

that I am not, exactly,

what you were innocently expecting.


My name is.... "Disparity"

Acclaimed tormenter, gridlock inducer,

promoted discreetly behind closed doors.

(and recently, financial market floors)

 

It is I...who will lead you to your first step;

the Stairway of Personal Acknowledgement.

Let's not trip on each others excuses shall we..

I assure you, there will be plenty of blame to go around.

 

Not to worry, our first challenge,

will be to unburden disporportioned

wealth, gender, race, that economically,

and morally weight you down, wearily.

 

How your necks and checkbooks

must burn and ache

leaning to the left, pulled to the right,

strand by strand one muscle at a time,

daily scenting cheese fearful of the trap.

(unemployed, un-insured, and over-taxed)

 

Struggle and Change, is remotely evident,

a lifelong process, evolutionary, powerful,

not to be confused with popularity,

self service or fast food relief.

No salt and pepper bailout will be served.

 

Together, we will learn to stand erect,

unafraid, without anger, as individuals, 

seeking, speaking, solutions for the whole,

not simply our family and circumstance.

NO blindfolds will be allowed or permitted.

 

Able will you be............

to leave this dark confining room

when you let the words slip out....

what can I do.....to roll up my sleeves and help

and this time, you'll actually mean it,

understanding how we affect each other and the world.

Actions and deeds build strength and unity.

 

Welcome to your first step;

the Stairway of Personal Acknowledgement.

THE ONLY WAY OUT...is....THROUGH.


 

 

Author notes

I took a dark twist on the prompt disparity.....
I was actually very inspired by a
recent documentary....that addressed the history of disparity in our soceity worldwide.
So I added a dark touch to it.

it was hard to write without touching upon history, but I was trying to make it
more convicting...as we all know there is plenty of painful blame to go around,
and it's just time to stop it and find our middle ground and bring solutions to the table.

I was worried, i've heard too many people, believe that Obama is going to wave a magic
wand and make it all go away.
That's not going to happen, we've each got to roll up our sleeves, our hearts, minds
to make it happen....Many charities need hands...real live hands to help them,
not just money.

artist credit: silenced_by_allends@deviantart.com



artist credit: silenced_by_allends@deviantart.com

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  • BHolzner gold member
    January 25, 2009

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    bravo!

    It is going to take a mutation of the human brain to undo what we have done. This simple phrase is what is wrong, "It is mine because I said so." We took over the american west and killed those that would not leave the land we thought was so desperately ours. We sold the idea to the entire globe that they must own a house with a white picket fence installed with a cable to access the internet or the dish t.v. We told ourselves and the rest of the world that we can take over and take advantage of them because we just can. We need to rethink, as our scientists say, 200 species a day are becoming extinct. Everytime we place a human footprint on pristine land it is destroyed.
    How ironic can we be...can we not see outside our windows that we have left a concrete mess?
    Just some thoughts inspired by your great poem!
    Betsy Holzner


  • The Wayword Warrior
    January 5, 2009

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    Dracula Crunch

    Hey Disparity! I love the theme you chose and the atmosphere, I found myself reading it in Dracula's voice. Later on though I felt the Dracula character molded into a kind of reformist democrat politician and as usual in this situ my attention drifted... I think you could further develop the quality of the first half in the second half keeping Dracula as the narrator - what would he think of the Credit Crunch?!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 5, 2009

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    I like the words here used, the metaphors,
    makes for a great poem with that imagery you pen so well.
    Thanks for sharing, and all the best in all you pen poet!

    Peace, Timothy


  • rinabina
    January 5, 2009
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    Very well written. The way the economy is today that picture duscribes it all.

  • dyke
    January 5, 2009
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    brillant, fantastic


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 5, 2009
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    wow

    well done I have no other words


  • poeticcaresses
    December 31, 2008

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    Wow! Pic is a bit disturbing... even for me, lol. To be deprived of my voice is a fear of mine... but as long as I still have my fingers! Definately a good prompt! Thank you so much for entering and good luck!

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