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[no title] it's just a bit of catharsis

Is it so bad that I want you?
that my thighs contract
my throat reddens
my stomach aches
and I blush from the ass up

is it so wrong that when I'm with you
part of me I can't touch twinges and throbs
that the back of my throat itches in a way
that only certain parts of you can cure

You say it's not so wrong
that I obsess over you
that I constantly want you

you punish me
for being with you

when I drag up enough happiness
to be with you to love you

you start to take away
the fuel for my happiness

the first thing you took away
was your need for me
then our play
and cuddles
the love

is it so bad that I want to be yours?
apparently it is.

Author notes

if you know me... you get what I'm talking about.

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Comments


  • wings09
    October 5, 2009
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    i like your words like "twitches" and "throbs" its really makes me feel like im in the poem


  • Lucian Valcor
    January 4, 2009
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    I like it, its good


  • blueyez
    December 31, 2008

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    ily crayola even though I can't scratch that itch in the back of your throat


  • love bleeds
    December 31, 2008
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    great!!! i like it..alot