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Teenage Storm

Falling,
so
desperate.

Spiraling,
Anticipation,
Never finding a place.

Changing,
Traveling
through time.

Only to see

What is
me.

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 31, 2008

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    I love how you broke the lines up.. It made each line almost abrupt, but it felt right for this write.. You did a wonderful job! Thanks for sharing.


    Kat