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Waste

I rip out at my hair,
Pulling it out by the handful,
Killing all the ugliness,
Heart no longer full,
I leash out at my thighs,
Leaving brutal scars,
Abandoning all love,
Life as black as tar,
I grab at my useless belly,
Tearing away the skin,
Ripping away my sanity,
Dying to be thin.

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  • incredible.
    this poem is amazing.
    love it.


  • EmeraldDreams
    December 31, 2008
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    Wow, this is an incredibly poweful piece. You have expressed a lot of emotion within your words.... although I hope you dont feel like this really

    Being "thin" is over-rated anyway! Women should look curvy and healthy. That's what I think anyway, so I think I shall go eat marshmallows now!