I watch and wait, it's what I do
I'm all alone because of you
Just as things were going so well
You had to send me into Hell
Every kiss you gave to me
Blinded me so I couldn't see
The hurt, the pain, the endless fall
You were laughing through it all
Your hand in hers, you walked away
And left me there in my dismay
So here I sit, my insides raw
Burning from all the things I saw
I saw you kiss her tenderly
The way that you used to kiss me
She giggled and I saw you smile
And in my mouth I tasted bile
I hated you right then and there
For hurting me, for how, and where
Every whisper was just a lie
As you waited to say goodbye
Each hug, each kiss, each, "I love you."
Each touch you proved to be untrue
It hurts so much, I want to scream
Instead, silently, my tears stream
You were the peak of my life, my summit
Now from that once happy height I plummit
Author notes
I read rule number 4 but the truth is that there is no cool name for a pet parrot and if I ever had one, I would call it Parrot. Very original, I know *winks*. Anyways, I hope you like the poem, I chose option #1 (and kinda option #7 too).
A contest entry
- Random Options by Shrat.
700 points, ended January 1, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this. the rhyming is great, and you brought it all together really well. Great, Great job!
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Rhyming is well done in your poem, emotions of betrayal well expressed. A sad poem too in that the person in your poem had to go through all that hurt. Well written and good luck to you in the contest.
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