Blue eyes;
An ocean of joy.
Waiting for her love;
Just as a child waits for a toy.
Curtain pulled back;
Eyes scanning the outside.
A smile so big;
Her feelings impossible to hide.
Her love walks to the front door;
She beats him there.
She runs to him;
He picks her up, twirling her in the air.
They've missed eachother dearly;
They've been apart for so long.
The only way the distance effected their love;
Was that it made it strong.
So glad to be together;
To let their love truely soar.
The waiting is over;
The deadly anticipation will haunt them no more.
Author notes
i used picture link 2. anticipation
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Comments
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Awh, wow, I really liked this -
You totally caught her feelings of hope and indeed anticipated, and the words you used were so simple yet so effective -
Great job, it put a smile on my face to start off my day of commenting
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A beautiful picture you have painted with your words. A wonderful take on the picture prompt. A delight to read this morning. Thank you for entering our contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy
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awe thanks....:]]]
much love,
Chasity♥
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This is a lovely work. Compelling and rings true to life. This is clear and the reader is taken through a time of anxious waiting for her soldier to come home as a strengthened love. Thanks for entering the contest and Good luck with your entry
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thank you :]
much love,
Chasity♥
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Wow, this is an amazing poem! I love how your poems flow, and how you have your own style that is all you. Keep up the good work, and good luck.
God Bless, Larkbird -
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haha thanks, your really sweet.
MUCH LOVE,
Chasity♥
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