Sometimes
One needs a home
Not just a place to stay
Sometimes
One needs a hug
Not just a pretty face
Sometimes
One needs a friend
To take away the pain
Sometimes
One needs some time
To think about today
Author notes
Things are getting weird right now. I don't know what I'm doing...
Sacrifice your Critiques unto me:
Comments
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Beautiful..and painful..
I loved the way you started the stanza's with "sometimes" (;
This poetry was so full of emotions.
Even though it wasn't so long.
Every stanza had a meaning on it's own way.
I'm sure you'll figure this out.
Just keep on writing
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Thanks!
I just needed some time to think. I'm doing quite a bit better, now.
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