Oh, gypsy queen
on a raft made of plastic bottles,
floating upstream,
as you fiddle away
a thief in the moonlight
Where will you go?
charmer by night
fates come your way
Gypsy queen,
where have you gone to stay?
of my unfathomable dream,
do you still fiddle?
Oh, sweet gypsy queen.
Speak of fortunes
as the raft floats you upstream
fiddling away
Oh sweet gypsy queen
floating away
on the water's sheen,
floating somewhere
Goodbye, Gypsy Queen.....
Author notes
A piece by me, Pirate of Spades.
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Interesting - although the background turned my eyes neon
It sounds like an old spiritual prayer to the Gypsy Queen, that a tribe might use for support for something - nicely written!
thanks for entering
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This one's cool. i like it, don't want to fiddle with it at all, except for that blinding background!!!
Scott
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lol. Thanks! This is actally one of my faves of mine and I hoped that someone would do a cool re-make!
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wow
I really like this one. especially the rhyming is great and very fitting. -
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Thanks for commenting! This is one of my faves!
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Thanks for commenting! This is one of my faves!
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