When you say I love You
I wonder if its true?
The sound of your
voice makes me melt.
But do you...
Honestly mean what you say?
Or is it something you
just say to keep me there?
Do I really make you happy?
Am I really what you want?
It kills me inside not knowing
The honest truth!
Why not just tell me?
Moments of pain will follow,
But better then never knowing
My love is pure.
Honest and true I would,
never so anything to hurt you.
So for my sake please
Tell me the truth!
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i can feel the frustration in your words. very emotional. and for the fact that i can relate! great write.
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wow, this sounds familiar. like...i'm pretty sure I used the exact same phrases in one of my own poems.
so I can say "I feel your pain."
You'll get through it, Justin. You may never get over that person, but you'll be able to get up in the morning and smile and be happy one day, I promise.
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^^ lol and you were so right I found someone way better...
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Beautiful. The heart aching question of the truth. I can feel the want in this poem. It is hard to find a love that is pure. Great work!
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