on cloud nine
standing on my tip toes
then dropped the ball and chain
attached to my ankle
i fell.
Author notes
'letting go'
A contest entry
- Quickie Party by Kari.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is powerful
wow
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Yikes, and I really think I felt you fall there
A hard, deep, and personal poem.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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I really love this poem a lot. wow, your take is outstanding.
"then dropped the ball and chain
attached to my ankle"
my two favorite lines.
good luck
kat
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Wow, very deep and thought provoking.
I love the imagery and life that you brought
to this prompt! Well done and good luck
to you with this one!
Jeremy0826 -
A fallen angel? Creative and well done.
Ken
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Ooo. I'm loving these short pieces!
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