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Release

A last shuddering beat
and silence.

It is time.

I release my hold
and find myself
rising…

toward not away.


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Prompt: Letting Go
Picture Credit: http://fallinginpanic.deviantart.com/art/Letting-Go-46715032
20 words

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  • smonte19124 gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    Beautiful, Cleansing of the soul is the start of a new beginning. Wonderful take on the prompt and deserving of a trophy in my opinion. God Bless, Jo-An


  • ChimericAntithesis
    December 30, 2008
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    I love the picture you chose to add to your piece.
    The last line also is extraordinary.


  • charcoal
    December 30, 2008
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    i love it.

    brilliant


  • In Too Deep1
    December 30, 2008

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    simply beautiful
    Such a gentle flow and wonderful imagery. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp


  • Kari gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    I like this. It could almost be made into a affirmation. Good job. Thanks for entering and the best of luck!


  • Angelflower
    December 30, 2008

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    a beautiful write. soft and tender.. best of luck in the contest!!

    Angel


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 30, 2008

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    I really love this one!
    Great thoughts here my friend and some
    amazing imagery as well. Good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    hmm we have similar thinking on this prompt I see
    the last 5 lines are excellent.

    good luck
    kat

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