tears
f
l
o
w
(not once
denied)
staring at
~our ~
crystal dream
b
r
o
k
e
n
open
(by your
lies)
turn away
~no~
m
o
r
e
(goodbye)
Author notes
Word Prompt -" LETTING GO "
A contest entry
- Quickie Party by Kari.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I enjoy the vertical design of this almost as much as the emotional power punch the verse delivers. Very vertically erect emotions standing tall on it's own merit.
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i like your arrangement of words.....well done
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very nice
it is short and a fast read, yet it does pull at the emotions. congrats on your well deserved trophy!!
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Congratulations on the Bronze Trophy
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i love that last line (:
wow
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WOW! Loved everything about it including the format of the words. Great job! Congratulations on the win. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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the format really helps add to the piece
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this was such a wonderful write! the flow and format was really interesting! It had a certain power to it! Thanks much for sharing! best of luck!
Angel
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I love your format!
Lovely thought for this prompt and I
love your border as well. Well done
and good luck to you here!
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Your format is awesome, and so is your background with it. The end part literally made me shiver. Awesome job, and thanks for entering. Good luck!
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I like this poem, and I like the presentation of it as well.
good luck
kat
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