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Josh

I stare at the person
Staring back at me
He's quiet but there's music playing
And i stare back freely

No tears upon his face
He's so happy standing there
A fairy-angel of grace
A miracle mezmorizing my stare

He looks at me with a look in his eye
And i don't know what to say
A glitter gleam shimmers around him
And this feeling won't go away

I'm starting to feel funny
I look into his eyes
Everything starts to disappear
My heart quickens and i sigh

He moves closer with a smile
What a gorgeous, crooked smile
I close more distance
A grin on my face all the while

A few more steps and there we are
We're so intensly close
I can't look away now
This moment is all i know

I reach up on my toes
I close my eyes slowly
A breath before i kiss his lips
This moment fading quickly

I open my eyes and i'm in my room
I remembered it all and got lost
A sudden smile comes to my eyes
And i whisper the angel's name . . . "Josh."

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  • unheard-whispers
    January 15

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    wow

    this is amazing. i can't beleive you wrote this about josh but it doesn't matter cuz i love it. it's so sweet. reminds me of my fiance.

    • yes, I wrote it about Josh cause i'm in love with him <3 and by the way, I don't get why you dislike him so much....? thanks for the comment though.