letting go would be my first
option too
but I'm not ready
so i guess it's stardust and dying angels
Author notes
prompt: option #1 letting go
plus option #2 picture prompt: http://zindy.deviantart.com/art/Rest-my-love-107912238
A contest entry
- Quickie Party by Kari.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You never stop amazing me...you writes hold so much meaning and power...letting go is not always easy.
As always a beautiful closing line.
Excellent as always!
mystic
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Ah..what a sentiment you have shared with this heartfelt poetry..a great touch of the truth of the life..well done my friend...
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this is sad...love the 'stardust and dying angels'...gives that feeling of innocense.
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again just so much talent
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Aarrrggh. Perfect
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Excellent. Not a word out of place... Bravo!
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pretty and sad
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this is so sad! loved the title.
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I love how the title blends into the voice of the poem ... it has such a hopeless hopefulness to it that seems to say that angels never really die or homeless balloons never really let go ... they just float on stardust memories
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I really understand this and have felt that way about not being ready to let go. You've done an excellant job on the prompt. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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nice take on the prompt.
it works really nicely -
Sometimes I'm not ready to let go myself and I find myself in that battle...
Well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Lovely thought for this prompt.
All the best to you in this contest
and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Very beautiful and creative... a wonderful approach to the prompt. Well done.
Ken
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interesting take on the prompt I like it.. especially the line
"but I'm not ready" the truth is raw and real.
good luck
kat
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