Don't leave my dreams
to crumble from heaven's gates.
Catch my heart, and believe
the world is a better place
Author notes
Picture Prompt -
http://zindy.deviantart.com/art/Rest-my-love-107912238
Please put what prompt you used in your notes & remember -
20 Words ONLY
A contest entry
- Quickie Party by Kari.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ah..yes it is very necessay as well..one should do it..not only for once..but time and time again..one should do it..well thought..
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Congrats on gold Jet...great prompt on the pic
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Congratulations on your Gold here!
A truly well deserved write my friend.
Keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
this is one of those 'mouth open at the end, and going 'whoa' poems'.... excellent! Congrats on the gold, and so worth it!!!
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thank you very much!! I'm so glad that you liked it!
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excellent progression of thought
the optimistic ending is really nicely put -
congratulations on the gold(:
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BEAUTIFUL!!! Very deserving of the Gold. Congratulations and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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this flows so well!
you did an amazing job with the prompt
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Wow, this was really beautiful. Thanks so much for your entry and the best of luck to you in the contest.
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How beautiful and hopeful words here!
I love your thoughts on this picture.
Well done my friend and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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What a sweet and hopeful write... beautiful just like the heart that conceived it
Ken
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lol. silver tongued devil you lol.
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you did it again...
you won GOLD... congratulations sissy.. but ummm you love me right?? so you're gonna share eh? after all we are twins and all .. and I know that you lubbers me lots right sissy??? RIGHT??? 
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I don't know sissy.. you wanted to spank me
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not me... never I'm innocent.. I'm an
you can ask anyone, that's what they will tell you.. you on the other hand.... not so sure about that part in the beginning of your name there sissy
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I love this sissy so much..
but its so sad to me..
excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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sorry it was sad to you sissy
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