It would be easier
watching the world explode
Into millions of pieces
than letting go
of the love we
shared
Author notes
Prompt: Letting Go - 20 Words only
A contest entry
- Quickie Party by Kari.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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excellent analogy here
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Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and for leaving a comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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so romantic!
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Thank you so very much for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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aw, this is really sweet and precious...love is such a amazing thing. Thanks for your entry and the best of luck!
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Thank you so much my friend for the kindness of your comment it is appreciated. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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So beautifully written and so true too!
It's a terrible thing to watch your relationship
crumble to pieces. Lovely thought here my
friend all the best to you with it!
Jeremy0826
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Thank you my friend for stopping by and leaving the kindness of your words. It is often that we have more sad stories than not so why not write about how you would like it to be. Happy New Year and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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You romantic, you! A wonderfully loving write. All the best
Ken
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LOL okay, I admit it thats my story and I'm stickin to it. LOL thank you so much for stopping by. God Bless,Jo-Ann
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this is an excellent take on the prompt. I think that you have a typo however, in 5th line.. "or" is that supposed to be "of" instead. a feeling that many of us can relate to ..
good luck
kat
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Thank you for catching the typo I was typing as I was thinking sometimes not a good thing. LOL. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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don't worry I do it all the time..
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