Take a breath my darling child
rest your aching wings
float lightly upon a gentle cloud
into my loving arms
Author notes
20 Words
Prompt: http://zindy.deviantart.com/art/Rest-my-love-107912238
A contest entry
- Quickie Party by Kari.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I thank you for your comments and applause on this write. However, due to the contest rules please do not add my name in your comment. Thank you very much!
Comments
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Beautiful, peaceful, trusting, loving write. LOL I can go on because its just that good. Great Job! God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Such a delicate write =)
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Touching and beautiful. There is so much in these few words. I agree with krizaa... it *is* sigh poetry... I actually sighed after reading it.
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this is sigh poetry!
wow.
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This is really really beautiful. Soft,touching, and gentle. Thanks for entering and the best of luck!
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this really had such a peaceful feeling to it, though it had a bit of a sad twing as well, but very gentle and just all around wonderful.
Angel
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Beautifully penned!
Loved the emotion and the flow. Best wishes in the comp
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Gentle and comforting... a wonderful write that captures this nicely...
Ken
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this has such a peaceful feeling to it my brother. excellent take on the prompt.
beautiful poem, just beautiful
good luck
kat
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