Dear mom and dad please don't be sad this is all I had. Im sorry for not being a better son im sorry for all the things I have done. I just grew sick of this world and all its lies im sick of waking up to my own cries. Today is as good as yesterday and the day before, life has given me so little when I needed so much more. Im in constant pain I should not be allowed to live life in vain. It's kind of hard to do this to write you a letter but hopefully it will make you feel a little better. Please don't cry for me don't waste your tears, don't blame the person staring back in the mirror. Well I must go I cannot handle the hate goodbye forever sincerely Nate.
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I would name it mr poe poe
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First of all, great parrot name. This poem is really sad, but the rhyme seems a little bit inexperienced. I'm not saying your a bad poet, or an inexperienced one, but it reminds me of my friends who are just beginning to write. Thats not a bad thing though, it could just be that you kept the rhyme a little simpler, which gave you a good effect. It showed that the note was hard to write, that you were struggling to put into words what you felt, and your reasons. Overall nice job, and thanks for following the rules!
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