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The Two Ways

Selfishness, blind to all others desire,
is deaf to their cries of pain;
demands perfection (but not of himself),
is capricious and unrestrained.

Charity shares others’ interests and joys,
drinks, too, from their bitter cup;
is arm of courage to weary, spent knees;
others burdens of care, lifts up.

Selfishness sits in a room all alone,
and gray are his thoughts and views;
too proud, too lazy to contemplate change -
voluntarily, lone recluse.

Charity sits in a circle of love
‘neath the sheltering tree of Life;
with interest returns all he's issued forth
to bless family, friends and wife.



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  • Nickelspring gold member
    January 21

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    A well deserved Gold!!
    congrats!
    KW~


  • Cup-a-Joe
    January 16
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    Congrad's on the Gold!!!
    Joe

  • Cup-a-Joe
    January 13

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    My Favorite Bible Verse



    << 1 Corinthians 13 >>
    King James Bible

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    1 Though I speak with the tongues of men and of angels, and have not charity, I am become as sounding brass, or a tinkling cymbal. 2 And though I have the gift of prophecy, and understand all mysteries, and all knowledge; and though I have all faith, so that I could remove mountains, and have not charity, I am nothing. 3 And though I bestow all my goods to feed the poor, and though I give my body to be burned, and have not charity, it profiteth me nothing.

    Great poem.
    Joe

  • Nickelspring gold member
    January 9
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    The meter on this flows along so effortlessly and the rhyme, natural. I could sit and admire your form all day, but the message of the poem is wonderful too- clear and wise.
    KW~


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    January 7
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    Beautifully written and expressed.thanks for the great entry. Hugs, Bunny


  • Periwinkle Blue
    January 7

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    Well said and we might all learn a lesson in being courteous because when we aren't, the full circle comes around and smacks us.

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