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bringing on the heartbreak

you've stabbed me through the heart
i'm bleeding and sore
you've turned my world upside down again
i can't take this pain anymore

what did i do to deserve this from you
i really tried my best
obviously not hard enough
cause you've turned out the same as all the rest

you've snapped my heart in two
this i can never forgive
i will never love the same again
as long as i fucking live

i hope your happy with what you've done
you've tore my world apart
i hope you realise what you've done to me
and i mean this from the bottom of my heart

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  • sky black
    January 1

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    i love the rhymes, shame about the nature and the context that the poem was based on.
    the rawest and hardest emotions are what we write best
    sky xxxx