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What He Wanted

You pin me down and feel my vulnerable body with your hands as I cry.
You spit out profanities as I tremble.
You order me to say your name.
I utter it slightly.
You spread my legs as I try to fight but I am too weak.
You scratch my legs with your cruel claws as I determine it is too late.
You are stealing my virtue, and I the weak child must lay here and weap.
That is all I am capable of, oh my lost friend why?
We were oh so close, you loved me as a sister and now here we are.
You are raping me sweet friend! Can you not see that!
You are torturing me dear friend! My legs are burning as my heart is melting!
You are no longer my precious friend, you are now my bitter enemy.
For now I can place that knife in your back as if it always belonged.
You no longer have control of this swollen, beaten, raped puppet.
You are now the toy placed upon a pendulum forever to swing in this painful life you created for us.
Now tell me, oh dear one, was all this worth the agony?
You mearly say, "I oh so wanted this!" and gasp with happiness.

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  • psychomonkey
    December 31, 2008

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    wow, it was so beautiful in such a sad way i got goosebumps. you were great at getting the reader to feel what u were feeling. well done.


  • thejollytinker
    December 31, 2008
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    Just so sad. Well expressed~ G


  • BrittlesSkittles
    December 30, 2008

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    oh god. I almost cried while reading this. this poem is full of betrayal and disgusting crimes and I just can't stand it that this happens so often. you use raw emotion and child-like feelings with maturity and delicate words. beautiful job.