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Precious earth

a tiny piece
out of bigbang's explosion
brimming with life.

forms of life uncountable
tiny insects, big dinosaurs,
vertebrate, amphibians,
unknown are many

human makes turning sterile
earth giving plenty
through ages,



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  • Nymphetemine
    December 31, 2008
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    I am looking forward to the final version of your poem.
    Yorkshire Bard. Blessings


  • Nymphetemine
    December 31, 2008
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    Thank you for your poem. It is to the point.
    Good luck in the contest.
    Yorkshire Bard. Blessings