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To Lift The Blanket Away





I want to lift the blanket away and cover you with my body.
Give the sensation of my lips under your chin and down the nape
of your slender neck until you breathe a different way.

Let concupiscence rise from the inner core of your heart
as your breasts pulse to be touched by warmth of my breathe
and the olive firmness of my skin.

Let the lips join complete in the wet taste of love
as tongues circle in the dance of ardent desire
and bodies join in the pleasure of moan.

Where all the dreams in the universe of our minds
circle just above the bed that we entangle upon  
and jealous Gods stare downs wishing they were human.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • tatianna1993
    January 2

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    amazing

    hey im tatianna and i love your stuff i write erotica stories but im really having trouble when it comes to poetry any tips?


  • Heroesrox
    December 30, 2008
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    Awesome piece. great prompt usage! Thanks so much for entering my contest and GOOD LUCK!