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The Seer

Missing image




Looking into the fortune tellers pool,
visions overtake her senses.
The world as it is, or as it will be?
Nothing is crystal clear yet,
she knows not what to say.
Should she reveal the full truth of it?
Covering it over with a candy coating,
for ease of swallow like a sour pill.
Or cast it out untold forever.

 

 

 

 

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60 Word Picture Prompt

A contest entry

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 17

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    A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Nice use of simile. Good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Word count: 60. Thank you for your entry.


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 12

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    This darker take on the prompt is also an interesting piece. Looks like the contest host has her hands full.
    Good job. Shancy.