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Thy Wolvin Domain

Anguishing hunger tormented the olden folke
Yet mighty were their eyes ere they saw the moon
For whence upon them she did coldly gaze
And the lonely wolf engendered their souls

TO EVOKE A DARK AGE

For centuries in darkness dwelt
This lust for restless ages
Upon the acrid wings of blackbirds became
Forever whispered by the autumn winds

TO TORTURE THE WANDERING SOUL

"Come and taste what we have seen
The damned perpetual bleed
Long bereft of human creed
Lost for all eternity..."

IN THY WOLVIN DOMAIN








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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 30, 2008
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    Cool...

    Compelling narrative that engages the reader with a deliciously dark undertone & seamless flow...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    And to think I inspired such
    poetic perfection. I am honored,
    and completely spellbound by your words.

    I wish I could say something that would

    do justice to your art, but once again I am stupified.

    I adore this!
    Thank you for sharing
    ~Pastel