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Shhh!Its Secret.....

My secret is that I am in love with you.
I love you,but you don't know it.
I smile every time I think of you.
When you talk to me I get nervous and anxious.
I wish that you would just ask me out already.
I really want you,I want you all to myself.
Why can't you love me back?
Is it because of her?
I'll be waiting for you.
Goodbye for now my love.

Author notes

I used my inspiring word:SECRET I want to say thanks to Abnormal 4 reading this!And I hope u all enjoyed this!

A contest entry

I WANT TO SAY THAT THIS POEM IS NOT ABOUT ME!!!ALL I DID WUZ MAKE IT UP.SO PPL WHO KNOW ME, NO IT IZ NOT ABOUT WHO U THINK ITZ ABOUT!!! IT IZ ALL MADE UP!!!BYE!

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Comments

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  • it may be made up (wink wink)
    but its happened to me b4


  • RawRzKandi
    March 27
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    sweet i luv this so friggin much


  • nOva-
    February 7
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    Haha. Funny. Cute. Like the questions in the poem, thats what gives it its color. Thanks for sharing

    ~nva

  • lil elmo
    February 3
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    WAT THE

  • richv22
    January 11
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    wow!!!


  • dinn0011
    January 8
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    I loved it. I want to know what happens. It keeps you lingering for more.

  • Abnormal
    December 31, 2008

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    This is really good. It's very honest, and I like the way you've asked questions in the poem. Good job! Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest!

    • LiL bABy boO
      December 31, 2008
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      thanks.i am glad that u like my poem.thanks 4 the luck and i hope i win!!!!!


  • mickey94
    December 30, 2008
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    awwwww nice

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