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An Ending to begin again ( HM )

Dark of light shines within,

Beauty of cover lays dormant

as ageless am I.

 

We seek the founder,

the womb cradled a feeding line

coiled spring breaks the wall

as I find freedom.

 

Life listless,

a journey of endings

calling echo's of distant trumpets

serenade to the open gate.

Author notes

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 8
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    Beautiful write here honey

    For me this write brings forth birth wisdom and the called back home excellent write indeed


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 7

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    I am so glad you chose this picture. And your imagery was wonderful. Loved it from beginning to end. A delight to read this morning. Thank you for entering our contest. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 6

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    So soft and comforting are your words...they float like music to ones soul...excellent as always!

    mystic


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    January 5

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    This is excellent sis!!!! You did A TRULY MARVELOUS JOB!!! i LOVE THE WAY THAT THIS IS WRITTEN!!!! tRULY VERY WELL PORTRAYED!!!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 5

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    A beautiful write sis, fantastic take on the picture. The imagery is soft and comforting, if that makes sense. An awesome piece, good luck hunni

  • chiefmac
    January 4

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    The oxy moron-dark of light invite the reader to lifes contradiction as a vivid image. The reader journeys through the prompt and the work waiting for the gates of life to open. The wonderful flow is smooth to move the work forward. Thank you for entering our contest and good luck


  • maralisa silver member
    January 2

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    wow this beautiful julie I love your imagery and the border good luck inthe contest my freind maralisa


  • daviscth silver member
    January 2

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    Your words almost have a magical feel to them Julie. I love the imagery. This is a great poem to welcome in the new year. Good luck sis.


  • Yorkshire kevin
    January 2
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    happy new year to you too and what a loverly poem to start it with,a great write x

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