upon the hill
a winter's tree
leafed in cloud
Andrew Hide
11~02~2004
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Written February 11th, 2004
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wonderful visual...a tree and cloud effects...very nice...PK
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excellent !!!
What ever its called ~ who ever called it >> it's a thing of beauty painted in the sky with your lovely well placed words >> Applause ~ Skinwalker
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Sometimes mother nature gives away these moments to be snatched by poets and photographers. To be putted in a lovely frame.
No nothing 'bout the numbers the rhythm is fine
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That's very beautiful. Maybe in the summer she will be clouded in leaves.
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Yeah I can see that....
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leafed in cloud thats a lovely description, trees look so beautiful in half cloud cover never though about it as leafed in cloud it is a lovely perspective thanks for sharing.
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lovely
Lovely. A lot said with a little wording...perfect haiku.
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Andrew.Excellent Haiku.Nice word picture.Bill
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Ahhh very clever.......... I could see it all
Haiku
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