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Solider

I'm a solider now,
for what I do not know,
I must find out how,
I constantly feel like its 5 degrees below,
I'm being watched by someone,
someone sent to help me fight,
to take down something i didn't invite,
why is it me and no other,
to take down this thing that isn't right,
it has a hostage, your brother,
my love is in danger,
am I being tested,
every day everything gets more and more stranger,
why did you pick me,
am i stronger than the resat,
I will fight,
and i will help you to rest better,
bring him out of the dark to see the light,
now I'm a solider,
fighting to keep him alive and remembered!

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Matt will always be with us! R.I.P!!!
i read ur rules and id name the pariot: Lucky Jack
this is option 6

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  • Shrat
    January 1
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    This one is pretty good, but I didn't particularly like the rhyme, and there are a lot of misspelled words. I defenitely did like what you said with this poem though, so nice job with that.