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Brand New Start

We once shared many moments I could never forget.
They were normal, ordinary for two little friends.
But then love created disaster, including lots of regret.

A history begone, and we become strangers.
A word from you seems forced and emotionless.
These feelings kept inside awakens thoughts full of danger.

A glass being filled with water, oveleaking.
The emotions that have been built up are the exact same.
They have made her silent but soon will make her shrieking.

A true love finally found inside her heart.
But reality made everything go hazy..
She wishes for one more chance;;;
A brand new start.

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Thinking about my Stranger Friend.,.

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  • vamp-angel
    December 30, 2008

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    this poem is real cool and deep. it reminds me of a song called Shadows and Regrets by yellowcard.