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Dark Fern

Darkened Leaves
Forest Queen
Endless shades of green

Mass Decieves
Long and Lean
Like nothing you've ever seen

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  • Beautiful Irony
    April 5

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    Hmmmm. This is an interesting piece. I do not say that as a euphemism! This is a great piece, a fantastic break from what I would describe as your "usual style". I like the rhyme, style/form and (as always) your flow is great. Well done.


  • The Fun House silver member
    January 28

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    I like this, it's short and catchy. I think it would be a good one for teaching as it has that sort of sing song tempo when I read it aloud. Great job.


  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    December 30, 2008
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    Simply Beautiful!

    ily
    Your blood sissy,
    Annie