semi innocent girls,
take from the street,
to be cornered, raped, and beat.
I see a pretty blue eyes,
so sad in grey skys,
behind that mask,
behind her eyes there is nothing.
Her parents wished her dead,
well mom && dad, she is dead, as dead to you and me as she possibly can be.
In her mind she screams,
CAN YOU SAVE ME?
CAN ANYONE SAVE ME?
The only thing that see's her pain,
is the small razor resting on her shelf.
Liquid hate drips down her veins,
injected there with a needle.
The deadliest kind of pain, is the one you can see.
The bulletproof smiles, the fake happiness in there words,
Only a true soul can observe.
Shes lying through her teeth,
counting the ways,
turning the clock,
skipping ahead.
Laying in the shadows,
throwing herself on the floor in vain.
Instead shes screaming, I know your not mine.
This pointless lust, had driven her to insanity.
Sitting in the dirt, its turning to mud, mixed with her tears, and blood.
Kill my thoughts, and kill my mind,
Screw the goodbyes, screw being "fine"
Im done with this life, Im done with the fake lines.
Its over.
Its over.
One, two, three, four, inject it more!
more more more
A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment please?
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in-fucking-credible. nuff said
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Wow, thank you!
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this is very raw and emotional, i love the real feelings this poem conveys "Kill my thoughts, and kill my mind,
Screw the goodbyes, screw being "fine"
Im done with this life, Im done with the fake lines." wow i almost teared up alil bit...this is great babe ur so talented
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This comment, you just commented is probably my favorite comment I have ever gotten xD.
Thank you so much, hun.
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yay! im happy about that, ur so welcome
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haha, were amazing.
Having convos in my poems, lmao. -
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i kno rite
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Hehe.
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nail on the head
man...kill my thoughts, and kill my mind, screw the goodbyes, screw being 'fine'!! this is a constant battle for me!! good shit!!
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Me too.
And thank you!
I love your commments <33
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i love the way it has many different plots in it. the way you wieved in cutting yourself with lust with her parents wanting her dead is fabulatastical.
it really evoked a lot of sadness after i read this.
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ha, aw thank you hun!
but to tell you the truth...I have nooooo fucking idea where the hell this came from!
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