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Inevitable cycle

What good is a wish
If there is no truth?
What good is the truth,
If there is only pain?

Why do we suffer,
For nothing we've done?
Getting punished for love,
Is love's pain game.

What good is love,
If none is returned?
What good is a yearn
If nothing is recieved?

What is the POINT!
Of a neverending circle.
Why not just jump.
Out of all this pain.

What reason do we have,
For dieing so slow.
What good is a heart
If it eternally bleeds?

Author notes

D-8 I suppose, but you never know if the darkest part of life is behind or in front of you....

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  • Manda-Lou
    December 31, 2008
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    Well done. I wasn't really expecting that for this option but it works. Good luck.