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Head Noise

This fear of being silent solved
by the siren sound
of turned pages.

Reality tastes like lead water.
I avoid it,
preferring to live in 
seductive eccentric,
for where could you go
without some words
between palms,
both calloused and smooth?

I am told I have to concentrate.
Mmm, lead water
tasting like frustration.

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  • iamthebeatles
    January 24

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    oh, this is great. Everything is great. each word, each line, each syllable is perfectly wonderful. I love the lines:

    "for where could you go
    without some words
    between palms,
    both calloused and smooth"

    especially. Wondrous job.

    cassie