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Fresh Roses

Pale blush pink to
searing crimson red
Pure bright white to
sweet sunshine yellow

These fresh roses tilled
in strong gardens at their
beginning are not born flawed

Slowly emerging, one by one
from seeds sewn with the
love of sunweathered hands
galiantly reaching toward the
sky with ambient pride

Dew droplets gently carressing
each and every petal
A heavenly scent like no other

Our sunkissed fresh roses
are like a gentle tap one
one's life, ever so worthy
of life's celebration

Author notes

This is not a new poem. I am having a problem somewhere within my computer that does not allow me to enter these contests using the pw option. So i copy/paste & enter using the new option. I have always wanted to write a beautiful poem in honor of the majestic rose

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  • Thank you for your beautifully expressed write, good luck in my contest and happy new year, Josie