My mother once told me
she'd always be around
but when i need her
she was nowhere to be found.
She also once told me
that i should never fear
about things around me
cause she'd always be here.
I remember she once told me
my dad really loved me
when she wasnt here though
he raped and abused me.
In fact she told me alot of things
which i thought were lies
i just wish that i saw
she actually cared at the time.
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Judged-ola!
Omg this is so sad!!!!!!!!!
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well writen
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Oh so sad
I wish I had a way I could teach the young that it doesnt matter if the abuser is a parent or a stranger the child so need to scream and let the whole family know the instant they can .If the family does nothing about it then they so need to tell a neighbor and not to believe what the abuser tells them for it is a lie they use to control them . Children needs to be informed of the dangers in this world and watched over by the family to see the change in that child when something is wrong .
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omg this is so sad....and i can bloody relate so well
wuve you sweetie. Good luck in the contest 
i no youl do ggggreat! lol xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Sad little piece, but good though! Good luck in my contest!
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