I'm sad and yet I'm happy
In love? Or out of hate?
So mad it makes me angry
In such a sorry state.
Don't tell me that it's funny
That I should feel this way
That ghostly - looking image
It is my heart's x-ray.
One frozen, breathless moment
My heart forgot to beat
When love walked in my window
Out of the busy street.
I knew a perfect moment
Now captured evermore
You came into my weary life
And made my heartbeat soar.
And now my soul is captive
From now, my life will start
Upon the light, in black and white
The x-ray of my heart.
Author notes
Letter X , word bank 7. You know, I really enjoyed doing this. Grand contest, well thought out.
A contest entry
- the big bang contest (word bank inspired) (invite only)(fresh writes only) by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 5, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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That big bang is very confusing, and your poem is a delightful examination of it. I love the rhyme and different ideas straying in. Much enjoyed.
Happy 2009!
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If this is a personal thing, then just enjoy. If it's only a contest entry (!!! gave myself away about contests..... ) enjoy too. Without some engaged hearts in humans we are all fit for nothing lovely boy!! x
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