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Sunday Morning, 1AM

Face is a desert as cards
are dealt;
tears held back by death.




















A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Nymphetemine silver member
    December 31, 2008
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    I look forward to the finished version.
    Yorkshire Bard. Blessings

    • MichaelBe
      December 31, 2008
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      im very sorry, i copied and pasted this after writing it in notepad and it seems that only 3 lines acually copied
      i will have to try and reciprocate the work