When everything is dark,
and the world seams to come to an end
When all doors are shut
and no one seems to be a friend...
when troubles increase
and pains dont cease...
You see a hope
something that brings peace...
In the form of a human being
God sends an angel from afar
That spreads the message of humanity
with only love as the power.......
Someone who holds your hand
and shows you that there's some one who will care...
Make the sunshine tear the dark clouds apart
and make the world fair...
Somewne who wins your faith
and things seem just so great...
Is someone God has a special reason to send
Is your true friend....
Author notes
Friendship is the most important thing in life...many a times we dont seem to realise that just the ones we talk to...go for movies with...have parties with...are not our friends...and mistake them with the ones who will always be there for you even if you are not with them...there is nothing more beautiful than friendship...only if you actually find a True Friend.
A contest entry
- pen pals poems PW allowed for a member 18 and under by Violinstrings.
650 points, ended January 23, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please, be as critical as you like. I'm a growing poet and I ought to be told what is the correct way to write a poem. Please point out the parts you liked/ disliked the most.
Comments
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Very nice and uplifting verse... I've lost all my friends in this worldly web since I've left India... I often remember them very much...
I liked you poem Makhala.... take care...
mina
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very good
lovely to share with us
is someone God has a to send is your true friend
this poem is great for this contest it is a winner to be shared with others
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2432519
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Thanks! I entered it in your contest, as you had asked me
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very good
this is great for my contest well done
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Hey Lucy... I luvd dis poem... n dis ws d true description bout a frnd... luv ya.... n keep ritin dese sort of AWESOME poems....
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Briliant
its veery wonderfully typed down
I liked the part of tha angel and the 'makes the world fair' one.Its very nice .Thanks for sharing,Take care -
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Thankyou so much...Im glad you liked it!!!
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beautiful
wonderful job
mentioning God and an angel
someone who wins your faith
god sends you someone great
first it sounds sad but it has a happy ending
good twist of faith
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Thankyou so much for your comments and applause!
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Very nice Mekhala. I found this optimistic and uplifting. Well done.
Love your Uncle Brian -
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Thankyou Uncle...your comments always matter a lot to me...Thanks a lot for being ever so supportive and encouraging!
-Mekhala
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