Rember the good times
everyone tells me this
but when i do i cry
i want to have her back
i know it wont happen
i only go to be with her for a year
but when i was i was happy
i had hope, now
i have only dispair
i love her
i miss her
i will see her again
i never got to say this
so i will now
gama i love you good bye.
Author notes
this is the first paice that when i wrote it in here i cryed thew everyword
A contest entry
- COME ONE! COME ALL! QUICKY FOR 200 PEOPLE! by Umi Juvariel.
800 points, ended January 21, 53 entries
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dose anyone understand this or am i just crazy
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Sweet!
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The emotion in this poem just drips, and you did very well showing exactly what you felt, and making the reader feel it too.
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This is so sad. I'm terribly sorry for your loss, I'm sure she's looking down on you proud of the poet you've become, and pleased with the dedication to her. I can feel the emotion you put into this, it's very good. Great job!
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did she die?, i think its more expressing your love just in words but very mainsttream. no deep meaning. its something anyone would say after breaking up with somebody..
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This piece is so heartfelt, I am sure it's made some of it's readers cry. You kept it simple, and perfect. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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i just love this this poem really senitimental and emotional....i love the way you expressed your feelings....my condolences goes out to you....its not easy losing a loved one but cherish the memories you two shared...and smile when you think about her dont cry .........
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This poem is so sad! i am so sorry for your lost. this poem is wonderful! i can feel your pain. i can relate to this poem, i never got to say goodbye to my friend before he died. i loved him very much! i wanted to spend the rest of my life with him! i can feel your pain!
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