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finding honesty

confined to earth while shining now
rays of hope commanding more
a star of truth may not allow
her graceful descent foretells demise

marvels of light expand your brow
untold stories become so real
wings of flight escape my vow
soon I must silently soar anew 


tears of solitude may disavow
a lonely seeker of only words
your purity now . .

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by Julia Starr
60 words

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 17

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    A very nice write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Word count: 60. Thank you for your entry.


  • LyricalFl0w
    January 5
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    This is very true, u also expressed ur thoughts well, i cud almost c what u're talkin about..

  • Thor-201
    January 3
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    This is very beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.