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Heart First

At first sight, i look away
Can't stand looking at you
for i know
that the words will burst
squizing though my teeth
The right thing would be to admit
'"admit what"
I can't even admit it to myself
Dening everything that i know
Every time we pass eachother
I find some excuse to look ther other way
Even after six years its still hard
wanting to say
"I love you"
scream it at the top of my lungs
however everytime
its a whisper in the back of my head
wanting to forget the love for you
the pain caused is to much
When one day, everything it turned around
one call was made
from one of your friends
imforming me that
the Love is mutual, all six years wasted
And now lets see anyone
tell me that TRUE LOVE doesn't exist

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This is a true poem, about my love life, however i am still to weak to do anything about the love that we share

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  • Symphony
    February 19
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    I can't imagine how hard that would be for you to live through; especially as you know that you love each other;

    Although I do wonder what's stopping your love from being as one, I'm not asking - obviously if you wanted to say, you would have, but,

    I'm sure all other readers will come out of this thinking on the same thing.

    "squizing though my teeth" <-- should be squeezing, just one tiny correction.

    Thanks for entering