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Dear God.

Let me introduce myself
I’m Mr. Undecided
I’m what they call agnostic
I walk a path unguided.

Some say to ‘ Fear your Wrath ‘
yet isn’t wrath a sin ?
Did you really flood the world ?
Did you see it all begin ?

Can you tell me what's in store
for the year two thousand nine
how about no wars
that would be just fine.

I guess I'll go to hell
that’s what people say
if I do not heed your voice
if i don’t do things your way.

I've told lies but never killed
I'm really not that bad
they say that doesn’t count
guess that makes me sad.

I wonder what they’ll say
when they read this little verse
I wonder what they’ll think.
Will they think the worse ?

I think I'd better go
not much else to say
one day I’ll get my answer
I guess just not today.



                     
                   
                   

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  • reckless abandon
    December 30, 2008
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    I love the flow of this, and the rhyming is amazing! Thanks so much for sharing!


  • tumultuous
    December 30, 2008
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    sucked me in

    with the first stanza. catchy, smooth, relatable. nice write!