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Stargazing

Cross legged
gazing into your dark eyes
that declare complexity
and deliver love,
a shining light.
I find beauty
infinite and unfathomable
as the gravity of your soul
pulls me closer.

A deep breath in
I gather all the love
the universe has to offer;
and give it to you, my light
hoping that you can feel me.
When I touch you
what do you see?

Together in this moment
we gently exhale,
the mass of our joining
causes all else to spin away.
The beauty sought out
and all the ugly
is distant,
non-existent.

Beautiful bliss;
it was here all along.
I want to begin
where you end
and end where you begin
and begin again and again.
Another deep breath in
as I peer in wonder at my Polaris.

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  • Big Scrive
    December 30, 2008
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    this was touching, and sweet. I'm glad I read it! Great job.


  • Quietgirl17
    December 30, 2008
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    Wow very well written. Great job