12:45pm;70 kmph
narrow dark mountain road
not a very pleasant weather
a strange silence spread between us.
12:53pm;85 kmph
me driving,
a strom brewing up outside
and several...inside me.
12:59pm;98 kmph
he filed divorce today.
forgot me.
thoughts strangling my mind.
1:07am; 108 kmph
vision blurred.
what to do?
throat choked.
1:12am;126kmph
and suddenly I had all answers
looked at him, smiled.
I bumped the car against the mountain.
2:23am
he lay beside me, covered in blood
I can hear the ambulance approaching
I know he's dead. Peace!
A contest entry
- Driving (prewrites welcome) by Danna Hobart.
490 points, ended January 13, 21 entries
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Comments
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That's a pretty chancy way to get rid of the soon to be ex. You could have died too. LOL
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