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Romance (See Note)

Oh, how we're drawn to temporal things,
like a fleeting voice,
or a faded picture in a frame--
which then we shape in flesh and bone,
and make the vaunted claim,
that it has touched some inner chord--

Oh what a foolish game!

Author notes

By romance I mean: dealing with idealized events remote from everyday life. It does not mean love as is the modern term.

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  • pixiestix gold member
    January 9

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    I really like this.

    It would have taken me at least 40 lines.

    There's no real explanation for the type of magnetism that sets off the music and leaves logic behind.

    It might be result those endorphin thingys.




    • Yemassee gold member
      January 9

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      I didn't delete this one...too bad, I did delete a lot of nice ones. I mean, nice by my standards.


      • pixiestix gold member
        January 9
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        You sent the other ones to "sleep with the sparrows"?

        • Yemassee gold member
          January 9
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          LOL, good one! Yes, under the brush they cuddle with the sparrow. I feel kinder towards the sparrow, I put him to sleep of my own accord.


          • pixiestix gold member
            January 9
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            Poor little sparrow. *sniff* I'd tell you my sparrow story but it would make you feel bad.

            • Yemassee gold member
              January 9
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              You know I want to know now.

              • pixiestix gold member
                January 10
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                I was a surrogate mother to two baby sparrows this past Spring. The nest spilled and the parents rejected them. I lost both of them. There, feel better?


  • Melodies
    January 5

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    This is the most amazing poem! It should be embroidered on linen and framed and put up for all to see. I love it so much.

    • Yemassee gold member
      January 5
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      You are both fast and good at commenting, a rare quality! I returned two for your one.

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