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lv...The Silent Message

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The silent message that I hear

as you think it in your mind

Tells me you will love me forever

for I am your loving kind

 

If you could put your arms around me

and reassure me all is fine

Whisper in my ear you love me

and that you are really only mine

 

Our bodies would mold together

and again be totally as one

Like the days in past remembrance

when each was laughs and fun

 

Smile my love, I will not forget

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  • arafura gold member
    December 30, 2008
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    Very romantic poem my friend! Bravo!

  • Papagallo
    December 30, 2008

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    Very romantic write. Why not omit "day" in line 12. Try: "Like the days in past remembrance/ when each was laughs and fun"
    Hear the difference? The two lines run smoother>I believe.