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Brilliance

Deny flourescence,
and all that can be seen in its presence,
because you choose not to see it.
Still..these things you can't see exist.

Deny the beauty only in things,
which do not comply with your agenda.

Don't try to understand.
Don't question...
because you...you don't want to know.

Paint a pretty picture.

If your night-vision goggles show you something,
you'd prefer not to believe...

Take them off now.

Sociophilosophy

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  • bobanonymous gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Applause


  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    ooohhh, i really like this alot, its brillant
    haha, and the ending, was just right. i like how you can think about it, and savor it awhile.
    keep it up and take care
    Stephanie ♥