Why is it you cant have better things?
they always imagine you cant fly on beautiful wings
place of a despised life
covered with strife
how they despise and underestimate you
how every westerner think they are more true
but you are the most beautiful shinning hue.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #47 by AutumnGypsy.
600 points, ended January 10, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
feel the thing that i feel?
Comments
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How lovely this is to see Africa in such a pristine light, we do underestimate constantly. Best to you in the contest
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Beautiful sentiment. I like the thought of Africa's "shining hue" (typo there btw...you added an extra "n"). The dark continent is underestimated, yet so full of strife. It's leaders are poor. If the majority of the countries ever get leaders that are true leaders and not corupt, then the world will have to watch out for that continent. Grins.
Write on, poet.
Blessings,
Myth
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