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~How Soon They Forget

Titanium chips,
pink parched lips,
dark glasses to cover each eye.

A cool glass of beer,
no sweat from your fear,
and you won't win a hand if you don't try.

A one-eyed jack
on top of your stack,
you think he may had fallen from grace.

This may be it,
just one more hit.
Make promises to God if He gives you an ace.

So you get your ace,
you even get a king.
You swear you won't ask Him for another thing.

Then you ask the bartender for a beer,
and the dealer for a hit.
Then you hit up God...How soon they forget!

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  • KayJay
    January 1

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    Nicely done... the poker gods are used to the fickleness of players, however Best of luck.
    Ken


  • Sadpuppet
    December 30, 2008
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    lol, this is so true. they always forget about god once they've gotten too much. well done!


  • Nymphetemine
    December 30, 2008

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    Its funny how we try to bargain with God to let us win. I loved this poem and how it flowed. Good luck in the contest.
    Yorkshire Bard. Blessings